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Sign this treaty written on graffiti.
Steep, are it's needs; it sleeps and creeps.
It sleeps away, all day.It's prey it
sweeps away. So pray for a way to escape and
Be great, full of hope.
Be grateful, and cope with the
doped and the dipped till they die, and
descend or decline to defend or
define any sign they have seen in their lives.
Then be surprised when the prize that
they find at the end of their bend is small in
it's size, and they all turn their eyes towards the skies
and complain and constrain about how to contain
all the pain and  the plain in their lives.
I despise and deride the survived and
contrived, though not so inclined while
considered entwined in our lives
embittered sublime and maligned.

This is how I feel.
This is how I think.

Impasse impedes.
Impassable.
Implausible? No.
Implacable.
Undoubtedly and undeniably,
Understand?
Unquestionably.

Uncontrollable unction.
Unrecognizable.
Unfounded? No.
Unmistakable.
Underneath and undetected.
Understand now?
Imperceptibly.

Infrequently, I frequent Lee, who on occasion frequents me.

This is how I am.
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Please lemme hear from ya. Good or bad, feedback is fedback.
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:iconorpheline-k:
Heh, cool. Some uncanny rhymes that you make work, somehow.
:iconre4p3r1:
it's an interesting read
:iconwhydoidothiseveryday:
When i was reading this, i was trying to think what it could be, and i thought of a rap. Because i was saying it quite fast, and rappers use a lot of rhymes. very well done

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:iconninjastar13:
There definitely was inspiration found in the way rappers use their words yo define their sound. i tried it a bit, i guess it worked!
Thanks for the comment.
:)

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---Surrealism without purpose is like fish...
Peace :peace:
:iconninjastar13:
Thank you kindly.
:)

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:jedi: Gallery: [link] :ninjastar:
---Surrealism without purpose is like fish...
Peace :peace:
:iconninjastar13:
Thank you, It is my hobby, my ... responsibility...

....sorry that was intense.
:)

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---Surrealism without purpose is like fish...
Peace :peace:
:iconorpheline-k:
like we need more quirky intensity around here, haha
:iconninjastar13:
yeah yknow what there really is too! MUch! INTENSITY! aaaaaaaah!

...wow i really have no control over my sarcasm glands. sorry.
:)

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---Surrealism without purpose is like fish...
Peace :peace:
:iconacepoetik:
That is some amazing alliteration.

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Thank you very much.
BTW - Fallout 3 = Best Avatar Ever.
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